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How to Write a Perfect Letter of Motivation (LOM) for University Applications
A Letter of Motivation (LOM) is a crucial document when applying for university admissions, scholarships, or visa applications. It showcases your qualifications, aspirations, and reasons for choosing a particular program or country. Below is a step-by step guide to writing an impactful LOM.
Structure of a Letter of Motivation
Header (Your Details & Recipient's Details)
- Your Name
- Your Address
- Email & Phone Number
- Date
- Recipient's Name (if known)
- Institution's Name & Address
Subject Line (Optional, but recommended)
Introduction (First Paragraph)
- Start with a formal greeting.
- Clearly state the purpose of your letter.
- Mention the program/university you are applying to.
- Give a brief overview of your motivation.
Example: "Dear Admissions Committee, I am writing to express my keen interest in applying for the Master's in Electrical Engineering at XYZ University. With a strong academic background and a passion for innovation, I am eager to contribute to and benefit from the outstanding learning environment at your esteemed institution."
Academic & Professional Background (Second Paragraph)
- Summarize your educational journey.
- Highlight relevant coursework and achievements.
- Mention any research projects, internships, or work experience related to your field
Example: "I completed my Bachelor's in Electrical Engineering at ABC University with a distinction, focusing on embedded systems and microsystems. During my studies, I conducted research on renewable energy solutions and completed an internship at XYZ Company, where I gained hands-on experience in circuit design and automation."
Why This Program & University? (Third Paragraph)
- Explain why you chose this specific university and program.
- Mention professors, research facilities, or courses that align with your interests.
- Show that you have researched the institution.
Example: "The curriculum at XYZ University aligns perfectly with my interest in renewable energy and smart grid technology. I am particularly fascinated by Prof. John Doe's research on sustainable energy systems, and I believe the interdisciplinary approach at your institution will equip me with the expertise to achieve my career goals."
Career Goals & Future Plans (Fourth Paragraph)
- Describe your short-term and long-term goals.
- Explain how the program will help you achieve them.
- If applying for a visa, mention how this education will contribute to your home country.
Example: "Upon completing my master's, I aspire to work in the field of sustainable energy solutions, developing efficient power grids. In the long run, I aim to establish a research-based startup that focuses on green energy innovations to support developing economies. The knowledge and exposure gained at XYZ University will be instrumental in achieving these goals."
Conclusion (Final Paragraph)
- Summarize your enthusiasm and suitability for the program.
- Politely request consideration for admission.
- End with a professional closing.
Example: "In conclusion, my academic journey, professional experience, and unwavering commitment to innovation make me a strong candidate for this program. I am excited about the opportunity to contribute to and learn from the vibrant academic community at XYZ University. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response."
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
Tips for Writing an Effective LOM
✅ Keep it concise (1-1.5 pages, max 700-800 words).
✅ Use formal language and avoid slang.
✅ Highlight achievements, but do not exaggerate.Common Mistakes to Avoid in a Letter of Motivation
❌ Writing a generic LOM without personalizing it for each university.
❌ Repeating information already mentioned in your CV or application.
❌ Failing to research the program, university, or professors.
❌ Using informal or overly complex language.
❌ Submitting without proper proofreading.
Sample Letter of Motivation
University: FAU Erlangen-Nürnberg
Program: MSc Information and Communication Technology
Letter of Motivation
I'm XYZ and I have recently graduated in ABC from University, a renowned university of Pakistan. I am interested in Masters in Information and Communication Technology from FAU Erlangen Nürnberg, Germany, with the main research field being Network and Digital Communication. ICT combines the most important areas of electrical engineering, electronics, and communications engineering as well as computer science.
My early preoccupation with electrical technologies and analytical subjects persuade me to go with Electrical (Telecommunication) Engineering. As I am a self-taught personality, and I started at a very early age with transmitters, receivers, cellular networks, antennas, dishes, RRU's, computer systems.To accomplish the end, I finally enrolled in my Bachelor's studies. It was started as a passion of mine.As time passed the undergraduate syllabus in Electrical Engineering introduced me to a wide range of technical subjects like RF and Microwave Engineering, Wave Propagation and Antennas, Digital Signal Processing, Computer Communication Networks, Digital Communication, Wireless and Mobile Communication and Satellite Engineering. Studying these subjects in my graduation kept my curiosity and brought just as many new questions to me as it has answered. My final year project was based on electronics and communication in which I had worked on the neural network of the brain and detected electrical impulses from the brain by using an electrode-based headset and then used this data for many purposes like to make an anti-snooze system by detecting the alertness and meditation level of the brain. My semester projects cleared my vision and I developed the strong desire to apply for Information and Communication Technology degree in my master's program. To learn more and improve my knowledge I also joined an internship in "Automation" during my semester vacations and I have also polished my skills during the internship of "Advance Embedded Systems" where I learnt about the ARM Cortex Architecture and RISC V, Major Communication Protocols like I2C, USART, SPI, CAN, Ethernet, and USB and their Architectures, Database, IOT System, and Local and Global Server development. Later on, I have started an additional course on "Introduction of Internet of Things and Embedded Systems". My research paper on "A Compact Size Dual-Band Monopole Antenna Design for loT Applications" is accepted in a conference "1st International Conference on Microwave, Antennas & Circuits (ICMAC 2021)" and under proceeding.
I look forward to enrolling in your program as it gives students access to a wide range of scientific methods of communication and signal processing, optical communication, wireless sensor networks, and fast transmission technologies including research-led industry technologies to achieve a key position in a professional sector or postgraduate research. I will consider myself fortunate to be a part of this program because in this course I have a chance to learn about the complex challenges of design and development that network and communication engineers are facing today. Another reason that l opting this program is it offers the knowledge of Information and Communication Technology and especially in network and digital communication as well as methodical and personal skills for a specific career orientation in the latest research and development of new and complex hardware and software. The Faculty of Electrical Engineering and Media Technology relates strongly to the research activities of the university to train engineering skills using practical examples, which will enable me to learn that how 5G and LTE communication systems can be used for developing new technological solutions for my home country. For instance, LIFI is a great development in terms of enhancing an effective and attractive speed of the vast Giga Bite of data transmission. So, I'm keen to implement this technology using the speed of light.
I have chosen to pursue graduate studies at FAU Erlangen-Nürnberg because of my absolute interest in Network and Digital Communication which has developed over time during my academic years. I'm particularly motivated for 'Communication Techniques', 'Wireless Communication', 'Networking', 'LiFi Technology' and 'Radio Technology. While going through the curriculum of the program. I found various subjects in the catalog which tie in splendidly with my goals. Subjects like Advanced Communication Techniques, VLSI for Signal Processing, RF System Design, Digital Switching and Transmission, and Wireless Network are some of the courses that drive me towards the Information and Communication Technology program. Erlangen is a perfect city for this pursue as there are world-renowned companies situated there like Siemens Healthineers, Intel Corporation, Elektrobit, and Cisco Systems. Besides a high-class academic reputation, FAU Erlangen-Nürnberg is also in a collaboration with industries which makes this university an overall ideal place for me to study. Keeping all these factors into account, I believe that Information and Communication Technology at FAU Erlangen-Nürnberg is a perfect suit to my goals of pursuing a career in research and development and indeed I will be honored to be a part of it.
Regards,
XYZ
Sample Letter of Motivation
[Your Name]
[Your Address]
[Email & Phone Number]
[Date]
Admissions Committee
XYZ University
Subject: Application for Master's in Electrical Engineering - Letter of Motivation
Dear Admissions Committee,
I am writing to express my strong interest in applying for the Master's in Electrical Engineering at XYZ University. With a background in electrical engineering and a passion for innovation, I am eager to join your esteemed institution to further my academic and professional goals. I completed my Bachelor's degree in Electrical Engineering from ABC University with a specialization in embedded systems and microsystems. Throughout my academic journey, I developed a strong foundation in circuit design, power systems, and renewable energy solutions. My final year project on "Smart Grid Automation Using loT" was highly appreciated and published in a renowned research journal.
In addition to my academic background, I have gained practical experience through an internship at XYZ Company, where I worked on designing automation circuits for industrial use. This experience solidified my technical skills and introduced me to the professional world. However, I realize that to make a significant impact in the field, I need advanced knowledge and international exposure, which XYZ University can provide.
The curriculum at XYZ University, particularly the courses on Smart Grids and Renewable Energy Systems, aligns perfectly with my interests. Furthermore, I am keen on working under the guidance of Prof. John Doe, whose research on sustainable energy systems is highly inspiring. I am confident that the interdisciplinary approach at XYZ University will equip me with the necessary skills to achieve my career goals.
Upon completion of my master's degree, I aim to work in the field of sustainable energy, focusing on designing energy-efficient systems. Eventually, I plan to establish a research-based startup in my home country, contributing to sustainable energy solutions. The knowledge and experience gained at XYZ University will be instrumental in achieving these ambitions.
In conclusion, my academic achievements, professional experience, and commitment to innovation make me a strong candidate for this program. I am eager to contribute to and learn from the diverse academic environment at XYZ University. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
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